NARRATIVE WRITING

WE ARE LEARNING TO CREATE NARRATIVE WRITING:

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in their flash car. They were driving through the cold forest. Jim and Debbie kept on driving when suddenly a UFO appeared and landed on the road. Jim and Debbie got out of the car and hid behind a tree.

An alien popped out of the UFO and said “Bidy bidy bee.” Jim and Debbie were puzzled. They were thinking and thinking but they couldn’t work out what the alien was saying. Before they knew it the alien had pulled Jim and Debbie into the UFO. They drove off.

It was a long and bumpy ride. When they got there they were amazed. The alien said “Bidy bidy bee.” This meant ‘Come here’. Jim and Debbie followed the alien but then they saw they were going to jail.

Jim and Debbie were trying to get out of the jail but it wasn’t worth it. They stayed there for a week then Jim felt a brick, lots of the bricks moved. Jim and Debbie ran out and got an axe. They kept on running.

Jim and Debbie found a secret lab and got a flying saucer. They went into it and started the engine. They zoomed off and rushed back to earth.

By Jasper