We are learning to use adjectives to make our writing more interesting.
Here are a few of Room 14's lovely Autumn Poems. They are full of rich descriptive language. Click on the link to our Writing Blog to read more!
Autumn wind sounds like a werewolf dashing through the beautiful leaves in the freezing cold air.
Autumn looks like leaves flying through the cold icy wind that howls like a ghost.
Autumn leaves feel like a rough rocky mountain.
Autumn leaves look like little snowflakes fluttering to the cold icy ground.
By Abel
Autumn sounds like freezing cold wind blowing
the rustling crunchy leaves onto the hard ground.
Autumn looks like colourful red, yellow, orange,
green and brown leaves dancing in the cold windy wind.
By Jasper
Autumn sounds like fast, loud wind whacking a pinata with a hard solid bat.
Autumn sounds like rough leaves scraping on the solid pathway.
Autumn leaves feel like crispy chips rubbing on my hand.
Autumn leaves look like colourful fruit on the trees.
By Josh
Autumn sounds like the wind rushing through the colourful leaves.
Autumn feels like crunching leaves when you walk on them.
Autumn looks like rustling leaves rushing straight down to the ground.
Autumn sounds like the whooshing wind blowing the beautiful leaves.
Autumn feels like leaves sticking to your icy skin.
By Ta’a-Marie
29.4.10
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